Saturday, January 1, 2011
it would be great if you could correct my english....please!?
it would be great if you could correct my english....please!?
hello everybody! please correct my english...!! i need your help ............. i am fine just sleepy, though. thank you for asking. i am glad you are agree to my opinions. waking up early and learning were bother me when i was a student. how far is your house to your schools? my kindergarten, elementary school, junior high school are near from my house except high school. i have to go onto the train to go there. it takes about 40 min by train. yes i will think twice before i do something. thank you for giving me nice advice ^^ so you currently live with your family. do your siblings live with your family too? as i told you i have a brother. my family has onw house, apartment, and office for rent. my brother will get all. because he is the oldest and only one boy. is it the same in hongkong? i know swiss people (or maybe europeans) do not give their houses to their children. people buy houses by themself. so you dont talk to your parents often. i do not think it is because you are not a good son. my brother does not talk to my family, and i talk to my family a lot, every day. but he is a really good kid. i still only the kid who is scolded by my family. i am not busy so it is really no problem. i like to help you ^^ oh, you met your friends this evening. aa, i can understand how you feel very much. do you like to meet people? basically i like to meet people but sometimes i feel very tired to meet people. speaking of meeting people ............. thank you very much for your help!!
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i am fine just sleepy, though. thank you for asking. i am glad you agree to my opinions. waking up early and learning bothered me when i was a student. how far is your house to your school? my kindergarten, elementary school, junior high school are close to my house except high school. i have to go onto the train to go there. it takes about 40 min by train. yes i will think twice before i do something. thank you for giving me nice advice ^^ so you currently live with your family. do your siblings live with your family too? as i told you i have a brother. my family has one house, apartment, and office for rent. my brother will get all. because he is the oldest and only one boy. is it the same in hongkong? i know swiss people (or maybe europeans) do not give their houses to their children. people buy houses by themself. so you dont talk to your parents often. i do not think it is because you are not a good son. my brother does not talk to my family, and i talk to my family a lot, every day. but he is a really good kid. i'm (or I am) still only the kid who is scolded by my family. i am not busy so it is really no problem. i like to help you ^^ oh, you met your friends this evening. i understand how your feeling. do you like to meet people? basically i like to meet people but sometimes i feel very tired to meet people. speaking of meeting people
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here's one paragraph: i am glad you agree with my opinions. waking up early and learning bothered me when i was a student. how far is it from your house to your schools? my kindergarten, elementary school, junior high school are near my house but my high school isn't. i have to go onto the train to get there. it takes about 40 min by train.
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I am fine, but sleepy, though. Thank you for asking. I am glad you agree with my opinions. Waking up early and learning bothered me when I was a student. How far is your house from your school? My kindergarten, elementary school, and junior high school are near my house except the high school. I have to go by train to get there. It takes about 40 min. Yes, I will think twice before I do something. Thank you for giving me (such) nice advice ^^ ("Such" isn't needed here, but I would personally use it) So you currently live with your family. Do your siblings live with your family too? As I told you, I have a brother. My family has one house, an apartment, and an office for rent. My brother will get them because he is the oldest and will live there alone. Is it the same in Hong Kong? I know Swiss people (or maybe Europeans) do not give their houses to their children. People buy houses by themselves. So you don't talk to your parents often? (or if s/he mentioned it beforehand "So, you said you don't talk to your parents often...) I do not think it is because you are not a good son. My brother does not talk to my family, and I talk to my family a lot, every day, but he is a really good kid. I am still the only the kid who is scolded by my family. I am not busy so it isn't really a problem. I like helping you ^^ Oh, you met your friends this evening? Ah, I can understand how you feel very much. Do you like to meet people? Basically, I like to meet people, but sometimes I tire of it. Speaking of meeting people...
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Ok, I'm going to correct it as well as maybe add a few things here and there to make it flow better, if that's alright with you: I'm fine, just a little sleepy though; thank you for asking. I'm glad you share my opinions. Waking up so early to learn bothered me when I was a student. How far is your house from your school? My kindergarten, elementary school, and junior high school are near from my house, but my High School isn't. I have to take the train to get there. It takes about 40 minutes that way. Yes I'll think twice before I do something. Thank you for giving me the nice advice ^^ So you currently live with your family? Do your siblings live with your family too? As I mentioned before, I have a brother. My family has a house, an apartment, and an office for rent. My brother will get everything because he's the oldest and he's the only boy. Is it the same way in Hongkong? I know that Swiss people (or maybe other Europeans) don't leave their houses to their children. People have to buy houses by themselves. So you don't talk to your parents often? I don't think it's because you're not a good son. My brother doesn't speak with my family, but I talk to them frequently, every day in fact. Despite that, my brother's a really good kid. I'm still the only one who is scolded by my family. I'm not busy so it's really no problem. I'd love to help you ^^ Oh, you met with your friends this evening? Ah, I can understand very well how you feel. Do you like to meet with people? Basically I like to meet with people but sometimes I feel too tired for that. Speaking of meeting people... *Remember never begin a sentence with "because", and to capitalize "I" no matter where it is in the sentence. You're on the right track! :)
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I am just fine, although I am sleepy. Thank you for asking. I am glad that you and I agree on things. OR I’m glad you agree with my opinions. (First is more informal.) When I was a student, waking up early and trying to learn bothered me. How far is your house from your school? With the exception of my high school, all the schools that I have attended are near my house. I have to ride the train to go to high school and it takes 40 minutes to get there. Yes, I will think twice before I do something, thank you for the advice. So, you live with your family? Do your siblings live with you and your family too? OR So, you live at home with your family? Do your siblings live at home too? (Second would make more sense, and I’m going to assume that this person in Hong Kong has already mentioned that they have siblings, because to my understanding China has a one child policy in place, but I’m not sure if it extends to Hong Kong.) As I told you earlier, I have a brother. My family owns a house, an apartment, and an office (building? One office to rent out is impossible, usually it’s an office building.) which we rent out. My brother will inherit everything, because he is the oldest and the only boy. Is it the same in Hong Kong? I know that the Swiss (or perhaps the Europeans in general) do not give houses to their children. People there buy their own houses. So you don’t talk to your parents often? I think that it is because you are not a good son. OR I don’t think because it because you are a good son. (Original meaning unclear. The first one is blaming the son for not talking to his parents, though.) While I talk to my parents everyday, my older brother doesn’t. He is still a very good kid, though. I am still the only kid in my family that gets scolded. It’s no problem, I’m not busy at all. I like to help you. OR I am not busy, so it is not a problem. I like helping you. Oh, so you and your friends went out this evening OR Oh, so your friends and you hung out this evening. (Second is informal.) I very much understand how you feel. Do you like to meet people? Except for when I am very tired, I like to meet new people. Speaking of meeting people...
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